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This can´t be something good/ Chapter One

Next day I was really relieved, but when I entered for the principal door everybody stopped  talking and looked  at me…

“What the hell?” I thought, “ just keep walking, keep walking” I said softly. But they just do this until I enter to the class room and sat. But… my chair … came down the moment I sat, had been removed screws. “Seriously?!” I said I'm upset.

Later when I went to lunch, the table in the cafeteria where I usually used, disappeared.  “This can not be happening to me…” I said with angry…

Feliks: just we go to eat in the stairs…

You: No…. I don´t have hungry

Feliks: but-

You: Feliks I don´t feel in the mood to eat! How could lunch after all ?

Feliks: Sorry, I guess this is not, like, the first bad thing that happened  to you today? Be-because we are all right, I supposed that the mark of BTT is only for you. But don´t worry we gonna help-

Before Feliks finished the sentence just I get out of there, I went to the top floor and terrace.

"Damn it! DAMN IT! All this time I just tried not to take anything with those bastards! And now this!" * I started to cry a little bit* "Hate them! HATE-"

***: Hey could you be quiet please?

You: Ha?! * Slowly I turned around, and saw on one side … was Antonio

Antonio: Just I ask silence, ok?

I was standing there with nothing to responses  him

Antonio: Well this is actually my private place… so If you can go, that would be really appreciated *he smiled*

I started walking at the door really wanted to cry.

Antonio: Mmm… ok

You: ha?

Antonio: Is ok if you stay here, I guess that you not had a good day… but just for today, see ya chica!


“What was that?” I thought and stayed there for a while.

-Skipe time

During a week, they hide my clothes when I was in the showers after gym class, every body throw me water ballons, from the high floors too, that hurts!... and a lot of silly things more.  Now today I was early in the class room, we had a test, when I was writing I saw for the person next to me and suddenly she said“ teacher! _________ is copying my test! “

You: Haaaaaaa? that is not true!

Teacher: __________  go to the regency now!

I stand really angry, when I opened the door a bucket of cold water fell on me. Of course everything was planned by the time I came out.

I ran to the terrace again, Antonio wasn´t there, probably he was in class. But I stayed there again, I did not wanted to see anyone.  I didn´t noticed how long time passed when I heard Antonio´s voice, but he wasn´t alone, I heard Gilbert and Francis too. “This can’t be good”. Quickly I hide in a corner. When they come in.

Gil: Haaaaa * yawning* Hey how was the party last night?

Francis: Was a great time, don´t you think Toni?

Antonio: Sure! Even when Lovino ignored me all night. But I think you had a great time with Arthur, he was really drunk. *He laughed*

Francis: Really, really drunk, I enjoyed that hononon. But Gil I saw you too quiet last night, why? you are not like that

Gil: nothing, just…

Antonio: Juuust the situation with “that” girl?

Gilbert: Haaaaa?!  Why you think so? The awesome me can´t be affected for this kind of situation.

Antonio: Is the first time that a girl received the mark… why she? Was Feliks who-

Gilbert: I pretty sure about what I´m doing! She deserves this! That bitch-

Francis: Hey, don´t be mean with the pretty girls

Antonio: Maybe you overreacted…

Gilbert: WHAT?? I overreacted? Fick dich guys!

Francis: Yeih! That sounds good.

Antonio: He said F-I-C-K  no f*ck Francis.

Francis: Anyway sounds sexy-

Gilbert: Shut up you two! Now go to eat-

Antonio: Oh I will stay here for a while, see ya chicos!

He walking around when…

Antonio: Hey what are you doing here, I said you stay away from here- *When he saw me with clothes and hair wet*

You: Sorry! * I started to walk to door.

Antonio: Hey wait… have you heard all we talked?

I nodded.

Antonio: I see, well now we know that Gil will not stop bullying you… so sorry.

You: How… how long it´s gonna  take?

Antonio: I don´t know, sometimes Gil take someone to be his personal bully, like Roderich…

*I started to cry*

You: I lost an important test… and now you say that he doesn´t gonna stop this…

Antonio: Hey, I know it can be hard, but-

You:  You don´t know! He is your friend! You don´t have any idea how feels that everybody is annoying with you! Why he is so mean?!

Antonio: He wasn´t mean…

You: What?

Antonio: He was not in this way, he turned this when Eliza…well nothing… Just he is not so mean how you think.

I lowered my head, when I felt the arms of Antonio around me. He hugged me?... Was... so cute. “ Is all right, I will talk with him ok?, but now la niña bonita tiene que parar de llorar, si?” he said. “Ha?” I said confused. “ I said now the pretty girl can stop crying, please?” He smiled. “Ok… ok” I chuckled and blushed.

Maybe Antonio can help me to fix this… I hope so..
Her we go the chapter 1, just trying to make this better, my way to write...

I hope u like it!

(Intro): BTT x Reader: Hate! and Love? (Intro)
Just  unnoticed / Intro 
Finally! the bell rang for lunch, I  lowered the ladder quietly  when someone screamed “FIGHT”
And everybody ran to the cafeteria to see this.
“Seriously, again… another fight courtesy of BTT, Yeih!…” I thought, tired of this kind of situation.
You: “Hey Feliks, what happened now?”
Feliks: “Mmm? Hey __________  you were there” he giggled. “ Well it sounds like,  yesterday  someone stepped on, accidentally, Gilbert´s  shoe”
***: R- Really? That is all? *Said a guy I never see before*
Feliks: “Oh sorry _________  I didn´t introduced you to Toris, Toris she is, like totally, my best friend ______ “
Toris: Nice to meet you *he smiled*
You:  Hi Toris
Feliks: He is new in the school and he looks like totally funny.
Toris: Haha thanks.. he smirked nervously.
You: So this is only for that stupid reason? You see Toris the “BTT” are students of last year, th

Next: BTT x Reader: Hate! and Love? Ch. 2
A suspicious friend/ Chapter Two
After another horribly day, just wanted to leave to go home now, but someone is calling and approaching at me…
Antonio: Hey!____________
You: Antonio? Hi
Antonio: Hi! How are you?
You: No too bad… * I looked down tired*
Antonio: I see * he had a face of pity on me* well, what do you say if I'll walk you home?
You: mmm ok… think so… but what´s if Gil sees you… with me?
Antonio: Ha… well he is in soccer practice right now, so is fine *he smiled* Let´s go!
After a few streets walking with him, I was thinking if somewhere my classmates will be there waiting to do me something. But at least, Antonio was being really nice and charming… and that´s is weird. Why is he being so kind with me... is a trap? I need to hurry it up
Antonio: Something wrong? Of whom are you hiding?
You: Well I heard that some guys will go to bothering me after school…
Antonio: I don´t thin

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vamp003 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015
im sorry im not a grammer nazi but the grammer in this story is funny.
Noriko01 Featured By Owner May 31, 2015  Student General Artist
Cute~ I love it!~
Just that in "la niña bonita tiene parar de llorar" Is missing "que"
So...It would be "la niña bonita tiene que parar de llorar.
Zamarazula Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Bunny Emoji-87 (Thanks) [V5]
Ooh you're right! I forgot that ^^; I 'll fix it ^^
Noriko01 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2015  Student General Artist
You're welcome,miss~ Shy Vivi 
Cahier-Orange Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
And all...
YoiHinamori Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
gilbert *kolkolkolkolkolkolkolkol* you will pay!
Zamarazula Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Yeah he will pay ;) but not yet,  I´m afraid he´ll  make you suffer little bit more ^^;
YoiHinamori Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
not that much longer.....hehehehehe.....
YenBeilschmidt Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I imagine this to me in real life, and I felt like crying... X3
Zamarazula Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I´m sorry! too much intense?
At least Antonio was being nice with you :iconspainsguitarplz:
YenBeilschmidt Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
X3 He is. But I kinda want a friend like him. -Is a loner-
Zamarazula Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Me too! boys can be better friends than girls sometimes, specially he ^^
YenBeilschmidt Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Agreed. >w<
FangirlingQueen Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student General Artist
This So..... Awesome!
Can't Wait For More! ♥
Zamarazula Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank u!!
The next part will be at sunday :)
Memichow Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student Writer
more,me need it ya!
Zamarazula Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I will upload the next part ASAP,
probably at sunday ;)
Memichow Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student Writer
Sijna Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013
Like it make more please! ~
Zamarazula Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Aaaw glad u like it!  I will upload more the next sunday :)
Btw you re from Netherlands! awesome! how is he? (just kidding ^^)
Sijna Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013
Yep he is nice but some times he is a little bit cold T_T
Haha (With that I mean the weather haha) 
Zamarazula Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yeah the weather XD  :iconepichollandplz:
I guess Netherlands is your fave character from Hetalia ? :)
Sijna Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
Well not the top but I like him but he isn't my fave character Xd
Zamarazula Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh I see, then who is your fave or faves? :)
Sijna Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
uhmmm that's a hard one I think:
Greece or Prussia XD ( But as you see they are totally different from eachother hahah)
And yours are?
Zamarazula Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yeah they ´re totally different :D  I think the only thing
that they have in common is the voice actor, is the same guy ^^

Well as you, my fave is Prussia, but Poland and Canada too
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