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Just  unnoticed / Intro 



Finally! the bell rang for lunch, I  lowered the ladder quietly  when someone screamed “FIGHT”

And everybody ran to the cafeteria to see this.

“Seriously, again… another fight courtesy of BTT, Yeih!…” I thought, tired of this kind of situation.

You: “Hey Feliks, what happened now?”

Feliks: “Mmm? Hey __________  you were there” he giggled. “ Well it sounds like,  yesterday  someone stepped on, accidentally, Gilbert´s  shoe”

***: R- Really? That is all? *Said a guy I never see before*
Feliks: “Oh sorry _________  I didn´t introduced you to Toris, Toris she is, like totally, my best friend ______ “

Toris: Nice to meet you *he smiled*

You:  Hi Toris

Feliks: He is new in the school and he looks like totally funny.

Toris: Haha thanks.. he smirked nervously.

You: So this is only for that stupid reason? You see Toris the “BTT” are students of last year, they rule the school. If someone make them angry, they "mark" on you and the whole world know must to bullying you. They are Francis Bonnefoy, is a big pervert, he likes flirting with everybody, and I say everybody, with  girls… and boys too,  Antonio Fernandez Carriedo, he is the most quiet, but don´t trust in that… also he like play with girls… and Gilbert Belschmith.. he is the lider of Bad Friend Trio, he thinks is really “awesome” in every sence, is really cruel, and he enjoy  to annoy people.. his favorite target are Rodercich Edelstein.., poor guy… Feliks and I try to be unnoticed, without standing, is the best way to do this.

Suddenly they enter to the cafeteria  and from the crowd pushed the guy at floor  in front of them.

Gilbert motioned for everyone to be quiet…

Gilbert: I ´ll give a last chance, if you clean my shoe (putting the his foot in front of this guy) with your tongue,  you can go. So you see I have mercy. *He smirked*

***: Screw you Gilbert Belshmith!

Gilbert laughed, and everybody started to laugh too.

Gilbert: Kesesesese You idiot!

Gilbert kicked him in the face and punched him in the stomach, on keep on.

Feliks, Toris and I just get out of there. I saw Toris shocked of it. Are you ok? I asked him. Ye-yeah, just a little bit nervous , but mmm can I hang out with you guys?. We nodded.

Since that day we try to be invisible to the BTT, to don´t have any problem with them.

*Skip Time*

It was a normal day. In my favorite class, art class! This was freer for everybody, you can walk around if you want to restless. We was in oil painting  and I was working in a portrait of my fave artist.

When Feliks come to talk with me and with his  brush made a lines in my canvas

You: Feliks Lukasiewicz don´t put whiskers on (your fave artist) face!

Feliks: OMG your face is like totally funny right now! *He laughed*

You: *angry sight*

Fel: Ok, ok sorry. ___________, can you come with me to buy some fabric today, I have a  dress design in my head and I would like totally love to sew it, kay?

You.  Of course Feliks

Feliks: and later can you come at my home to help with the dress measurements. Ha and Toris is coming too.

You: Sure!

He smiled at me and turned back quickly when…

Gilbert:  WHAT ARE YOU F*CKING DOING?!!

The class was in absolutely silence, Feliks had smeared his paint palette on Gilbert's shirt…

Gilbert: ARE YOU BLIND? BASTARD!

Feliks: Haaa…. I… I am so-sorry. *He looked down*

Gilbert: YOU SORRY?!!! Son of b-

Toris: He said he's sorry,

Gilbert: HAAA?!
Toris: He apologized… to you, it was an accident

Gilbert: HOW ARE YOU IN FIRST PLACE??!

Francis: He looks like someone new. Hononon. *He put an arm on the back of Toris* You are cute… really really cute

Gilbert:  FRANCIS!!!

Francis: Sorry Gilbo...

Gilbert: Don´t call me that! SCHEISSE! Look at all the paint in me shirt. * He removed his shirt * This shirt costs more than all your clothes together!

Feliks just was in silence, his hand shaking a little bit, and probably he gonna cry by nervous.

You: Hey Gilbert! * I said I'm upset, but quickly I repented…*

Gilbert saw me and raise an eyebrow. “Who are you? Must to be new in the school too”

You: No, I-

Gilbert: I don´t care!, today  everyone thinks that can raise your voice at me, and stain the awesome me with paint!

You: *I started to talk really softly* Gilbert, please, we don´t want to have troubles, just was an accident-

Gilbert: Don´t  be stupid!

You:  And I can wash your shirt! *I yelled… ok probably I was really nervous too, to think clear* But please, don’t hurt him.

Gilbert looked at me really surprised,  and motioned Francis and Antonio to go.

That´s was all? Really?.  Ok, is the first time a girl confronts him. And just left…
More late, shopping with Feliks, we was shocking about. We knew the consequences to talk Gilbert Belshmith in that way.

Toris: I don´t understand. Why he didn´t punch us?

Feliks: I don´t know, probably he didn´t hit _____________ because is  a girl,  but us?

Toris: I think if he if  had tried to punch me, I would have fought him!

Feliks: Of course I could do the same! But when someone defense of him, Francis and Antonio  fight too. Is three vs one. That isn´t like totally unfair!

Toris: But we are at least two.

Feliks: But you don’t know how they fight. They don´t play fair
You: Hey I´m here too,  I could fight with one too… I think so. Any way nothing happened guys! We won: 1 – BTT :0

At least that I thought at beginning...
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:iconnjhetalia:
NjHetalia Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
Uhm you have a lot of grammar mistakes. I just thought I'd let you know. Otherwise it is a good intro ^^
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Zamarazula Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I know, I´m so sorry, Sweating a little... I´m trying to get it better and thanks!
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:iconnjhetalia:
NjHetalia Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014
The best thing to do is have an editor. Mine is my guy friend Adrian. And when he's not online, my editor is Open Office XD
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Zamarazula Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Open Office I guess is a translator program? :)
Well as you, sometimes I can find an editor, but there´s noy always available to help :/

Btw thanks  for the "watch" dear is really appreciated :iconorlyspainplz:
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:iconnjhetalia:
NjHetalia Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014
np ^w^
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ilovecats13 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OOOOOO MORE?
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Zamarazula Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Sure! here is the next part fav.me/d6roajc :)
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ilovecats13 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
^^ AWESOME
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ScarletC Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Student General Artist
BOYS OVER FLOWERS HETALIA STYLE!!! YES XD
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HetalianLoverXD Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Student Writer
That's what I was thinking! XD
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